May 2012
57 posts
Oh god, I’m so scared. I’ve never submitted a troll before. I’m worried I might mess up. If I do, please ignore this. But if I did submit it the right way, I want you to be as blunt as possible. I REALLY want to improve on her. I’m also thinking of submitting this to other fantroll reviewers.
Q: You’ve submitted properly - don’t worry! In our case, we’re not necessarily a review blog so we have a specific tag (Troll review Wednesday or something-a-rather), so if you wish to submit again in the future, just remember to tag that as so!
Age: 6.46 sweeps old
Fetch Modus: Pocket
Specibus: Match-kind
Lusus: Salamander (ManderMom)
Symbol: The alchemical symbol for fire, the triangle
Dream planet: Prospit
Title: The Witch of Time
Land: Land of Water and Captain crunch Trees
Zodiac: Aquarius
Quadrants:
♥- Varius
♦- Ceshia
♣-
♠-
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Your name is FLOGER TRITII.
Fire fire, FIRE! Oh, it’s just you. Hi there!
You enjoy playing so many GAMES. So much, in fact, that you
have game posters LITTERED all over your hive’s wall. From Trollhou,
Fiduspawn, The Legend of Zaeldi, Ray-Troll, Lusus Crossing, and more!
Heck, even your flarp is based off the Doctor class! You’re that much
of a tool. And… Even though you have a matesprit, already, You secretly
harbor red feelings to a character that DOESN’T exist. Despite your
matesprit saying that’s totally fine with her, you just feel like shit when
you think about the Lookout class.
Q: I would replace this spot with an intro and move this shiny gem into a different location!
You are OBSESSED with shiny things. You have collected so much of it,
despite the fact that some don’t even have a value. You sorta counter
this by living next to an abandoned mine, which is weird, since it isn’t
even close to being EXHAUSTED. Your lusus gets very scared when you go
inside, however. She tells you not to VENTURE in the mines via slapping
her tail on the floor. She tells you that rubble might fall on you and
crush you to DEATH. Heh, what she doesn’t tell you is that there are
strange voices coming from them. The deeper you travel through the mines,
the louder and more horrifying they get.
You absolutely HATE water. You hate hate hate hate hate hate… Hate hate
hate hate hate hate hate hate hate hate HATE IT! Grrr…
It just makes you rage. RAGE! It snuffs out your fire. It’s absolutely NOT
fair. Even though you hate it so much, you know you need it to SURVIVE, which
is why you reluctantly made a small river next to your hive. Mandermom says flowing water is the best water. Mother knows best. You’re starting to gain a tolerance to it, though. Perhaps it is because of your sea-dwelling moirail, or maybe it’s just that you’re used to getting water everyday.
Oh yes, about that fire you keep talking about… You, having Pyrokinesis, can control fire. What a surprise… Anyway, despite your nice demeanor, you enjoy watching things burn. Especially LIVING CREATURES. Said creatures usually consist of things being as small as buzzbeasts to things being as big as squeakbeasts. One half of you hopes not to become like the Burner class, but the other half does. These thoughts about burning trolls are becoming more than a nuisances. It’s… very unsettling and bothering.
Your trolltag is flammableBothersome and You t3nd to cliiing to shiiiny obj3cts! 3sp3ciiially hiiighly burnabl3 on3s!
Q: Good troll - but she does seem to be all over the place with her interests! I would keep to a certain theme!
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Please, if you have any questions, just tell me and I’ll answer anonymously.
please ignore the last thing I sent OTL
I’m so sorry I hadn’t realized it was a link. ;A;
==> BE THE COROMORTIOLOGIST.
You are now the COROMORTIOLOGIST.
Your name is KILOXS MARANA, a CYANBLOOD living in the hollowed out center of a MASSIVE TREE you call your HIVE. You are just over SEVEN SWEEPS OLD and live with your OWLDAD LUSUS.
He isn’t that bad, you suppose. At times, he brings you the dead corpses of his kills from his various hunts, which you immediately DISSECT AND STUDY. If he happens to bring in anything peculiar or exceptionally odd, you FOSSILIZE IT IN AMBER and use it to DECORATE YOUR HIVE. Of course, most of your fossilized beauties are from your own finds. You spend most of your time out and about searching for UNUSUAL CADAVERS and dragging them back to your home to EXAMINE AND FOSSILIZE.
Fossilizing dead things is but one of your MANY INTERESTS. Included in your interests are PALEONTOLOGY and BIOLOGY, though what really piques your interests are ANCIENT FOSSILS FROM TIMES LONG PAST, not those silly little things you find dragged off to the side of a forest path. Instead of probing them with your ever-handy EMBALMING TOOLS, you take great care in keeping those intact and hanging them on your walls, your favorite being in the form of the swirling AMMONITE LUSUS FOSSIL you keep on your neck. Or rather, what remained of the fossil. It was only one little piece that you’d managed to find inside an old parcel, after all. Your LONG CYAN COAT was also found in said aforementioned parcel, along with a book filled with research notes prompting you to believe that it had all previously belonged to your ANCESTOR. Some trolls find the fact that you wear such a glaringly unfitting coat ODD, but YOU DON’T REALLY CARE WHAT THEY HAVE TO SAY ON THE MATTER. Your ancestor was cool from what you know of him, and you wish to be just like him. Surely you will one day grow taller and fill the rest of the coat out. At least, you hope so.
Q: The part on the ancestor and coat could probably stand alone in separate paragraphs. Or, if it suits you better, you should probably fix it so you’re not going back and forth on different subjects.
You like to FLARP on occasion, which has led to more than a few close shaves on your part. Fortunately for you, it also provides a wonderful scenario for you to collect more bodies to decorate you hive with, so it all evens itself out in your thinkpan. ROLE PLAYING to you is only fun if you can get something out of it in the end, and you are VERY PICKY when it comes to who you are willing to play with. Your feelings towards the HEMOSPECTRUM are NOT THE STRONGEST, but you certainly do not ignore it. You typically do not like dealing with GUTTERBLOODS or anyone much lower than yourself on the hemospectrum unless they can show themselves to hold enough mental capacity to engage in a well thought out conversation with you. While it GREATLY PAINS YOU to have to deal with any of the IDIOTIC BANTER of the trolls HIGHER THAN YOU on the hemospectrum, you usually grudgingly go along with whatever it is that they want since you believe that THAT IS SIMPLY THE WAY THINGS ARE SUPPOSED TO BE.
Q: This seems that he doesn’t like associating with lowbloods but then you go on to say that highbloods are just as bad! Does he just dislike everyone out of his color/area on the spectrum?
You yourself are a BIT HYPOCRITICAL. You act superior to anyone that you perceive as not as smart as you are - which is pretty much most anyone - and behave almost condescendingly. That is, until the person you are speaking to starts to get a little HOSTILE, to which you either TAKE THEM OUT WITH YOUR CANNULA or, if it seems as if they are much larger than you by any amount, RUN AWAY AS QUICKLY AS YOU CAN. As such, you can act quite COWARDLY at times, giving yourself NO END OF GRIEF over how YOU REALLY SUCK AT ACTUAL FIGHTING.
You liken yourself to be something of a scientist, and dream one day of following in the footsteps of your ancestor to become a COROMORTIOLOGIST. While other trolls tend to look upon them as simply there to gather the abandoned bodies of the deceased, you hold anyone in the profession with a tremendous amount of respect. It is up to them, after all, to collect discarded bodies and find the cause of their demise, on top of dealing with properly getting rid of them. As such, you can come off as a bit SNOBBY sometimes, and prefer to keep to yourself instead of interacting with other trolls, mostly because you’re SCRAWNY and wouldn’t really look forward to a brawl against anyone bigger than you. As such, you tend to lean towards STABBING PEOPLE WITH YOUR CANNULA or trying to outwit them instead of any hand to hand combat.
Q: This is also confusing! You’ve jumped back to the killing of others while the beginning starts with his dream to become a coromortiologist! You should probably move the end to the top and the top to the end! Or just separate them!
CADAVERS and SKELETONS fascinate you, as if the fact that you decorate every inch of your living space with them is not enough to make that clear. Your horns replicate the bends on the lower half of your symbol, and you use your RESEARCH MODUS despite its difficulties in that it only gives you items once you have taken detailed notes on their scientific attributes.
Your handle is misguidedTheorist [MT] and you ☠ < suppose that you are 4tunate 4 all you have
You are the KNIGHT OF DEATH from the LAND OF FOSSILS AND GLOW [LoFaG]
Once you enter the MEDIUM, you will find that your consorts are BLUE BATS who like ARCHITECTURE. You are a PROSPIT DREAMER.
Q: Sounds fine! Just change some paragraphing is all! Good troll; keep it up!
I apologize! I won’t be getting to fantrolls today, instead I’ll review them tomorrow.
-Q
Sounds good!
-Q
Doesn’t seem too bad!
But if you wanted to be mean/ironic/what have you, you could also give her a really girly title!
-Q
Oh Lord I don’t even know what I’m doing here. Okay, I want to make better fantrolls, so here goes nothing:
http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg440/scaled.php?server=440&filename=lacertodomok2.png&res=landing
> Be the optimistic troll.
Your name is LACERT ODOMOK and you like it. You like lots of things, actually. You are 6.5 sweeps old and ENJOYING YOUR LIFE.
I don’t think you’d get shit for him, but I’d be careful anyways! It’s a fine idea to me.
-Q
Q: I apologize in advance for not getting you the intro dfgasdf your submit box wasn’t open and it was too large to send through asks. @ A @
Your name is IRACUS CAYSCE.
You love PAINTING MURALS in VERY OBSCURE PLACES, then RE-PAINTING THEM WHEN PEOPLE TAKE THEM DOWN. You HATE being IGNORED, but it happens a LOT, even though you are very TALL. You don’t really understand WHY, but lots of people say you are USELESS and a WASTE OF SPACE. This is NOT TRUE. You can be very BITCHY, and you enjoy CRITICIZING PEOPLE WHO ARE LONELY. This is mostly to HIDE THE FACT THAT YOU HAVE NO FRIENDS. You do NOT, however, bitch at people who are HIGHER BLOOD COLORS than you. Despite this, you can SOMEHOW FIT INTO ANY CROWD.
Yep!
-Q
I’ll also post this one!
-Q
Alright! I don’t remember if you wanted a mode of transport so could you specify?
And also, of course we’ll affiliate! u v u
-Q
I would think so since their aspect is “time”!
-Q
Good question! I like mod A’s (of the troll review) opinion that blood colors have their own jobs like castes, so I would say no, but you don’t always have to follow my ideas!
-Q
Not that I’ve seen!
-Q
She could probably have a tall but thin hive that’s average sized! Aradia’s hive was actually a little big despite her blood color. I would probably keep her hive away from the water since she’s a lowblood, though.
-Q
Lusi can literally be any animal/mythical creature you think of as long as they’re not too humanoid or an inanimate object!
I would think something of the avian variety for her!
-Q
Sounds fine to me!
-Q
